Story
PAGE 1 (Establish their dynamic)
Panel 1 (Vertical, full width, top of page)
Establishing shot. High school classroom, late afternoon. Golden sunlight streams through windows. Students blurred in background.
SFX (sound effect): None – silence
Caption box (top left): "Everyone thought they were an odd pair."
Panel 2 (Medium shot, bottom left)
Neo sits at his desk, writing in a notebook. He looks up with a gentle smile. Dimples visible. Large eyes soft. Chestnut hair falling over forehead.
Caption box (continuing): "The quiet sun..."
Panel 3 (Medium shot, bottom right)
Tian leans against Neo's desk, looking down at him. Broad shoulders. Dyed brown hair at nape. Untucked shirt. His monolid eyes are soft in a way he hides from everyone else.
Caption box (continuing): "...and the shadow who loved him."
PAGE 2 (Cafeteria – Tian watching from afar)
Panel 1 (Wide shot, full page or large panel)
Busy high school cafeteria. Students scattered. Neo sits alone at a corner table by a window. Warm light hits his face. He eats slowly, looking outside.
SFX (in background, small): chatter chatter
Panel 2 (Close-up, inset in top right corner of Panel 1)
Tian standing half-hidden behind a pillar. His face is in shadow except one monolid eye visible. He stares at Neo.
No caption. No SFX. Pure silence.
Panel 3 (Tight close-up, bottom of page)
Only Tian's eye. The monolid. A tiny catchlight. His gaze is longing, aching, hopelessly soft.
Caption box (small, italic): "Just like this. From here. That's enough."
PAGE 3 (Walking home – the almost-touch)
Panel 1 (Horizontal, top third of page)
Low angle, late afternoon, tree-lined street. Neo walks ahead, looking at his phone. A small smile. Dimples. Rust-colored jacket. Chestnut hair catching light.
SFX: footsteps... footsteps...
Panel 2 (Medium shot, middle of page)
Tian walks two steps behind Neo. His dyed brown hair moves in a light breeze. He watches the back of Neo's head. His hand lifts slowly toward Neo's shoulder.
SFX: wind...
Panel 3 (Extreme close-up, bottom left)
Tian's fingers, almost touching the fabric of Neo's jacket. Hovering. Trembling slightly.
Panel 4 (Close-up, bottom right)
Tian pulls his hand back. His monolid eyes drop to the ground. His jaw is tight. Painful resignation.
Caption box: "Not yet. Maybe never."
PAGE 4 (Neo turns around – Tian's mask)
Panel 1 (Medium shot, top half of page)
Neo turns his head slightly, looking back over his shoulder. His large eyes are curious, open. Dimples fading.
Neo (small speech bubble): "Tian? You okay back there?"
Panel 2 (Medium shot, bottom half of page)
Tian looks up instantly. His face transforms into a confident, easy smile. Monolid eyes crinkle at the corners. Cool mask perfectly in place.
Tian (speech bubble, casual): "Yeah. Just thinking. Race you to the corner."
SFX: laugh
Panel 3 (Small panel, bottom right corner)
Tian sprints past Neo, laughing. But his eyes in that one frame – a flash of pain behind the smile.
No text.
PAGE 5 (Study session – Tian stares)
Panel 1 (Full page spread or large panel)
Cozy bedroom. Evening. Desk lamp and fairy lights. Warm orange glow. Neo sits cross-legged on a dark blue rug, back against Tian's bed, reading a thick book. Cream sweater. Chestnut hair tucked behind one ear. Dimples as he smiles at the page.
Panel 2 (Close-up, inset over Panel 1)
*Tian lies on his stomach on the bed above. Chin on both hands. A book is open in front of him but he isn
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