Story
The Face I Left Behind
Chapter 1: The Boy Nobody Saw
Page 1
Panel 1:
A crowded high school hallway. Students laugh, talk, and walk past each other.
Narration:
“Everyone wants to be noticed.”
Panel 2:
A boy walks through the hallway holding books tightly. His hair covers his eyes. His uniform is slightly messy.
Student 1:
“Is that Ren again?”
Student 2:
“Man… he looks worse every year.”
Panel 3:
Close-up of Ren Akizuki’s face. Tired eyes behind glasses.
Narration:
“But some people spend their entire lives trying to disappear.”
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Page 2
Panel 1:
Ren sits alone at lunch while everyone else is with friends.
Ren (thinking):
“Every day is the same.”
Panel 2:
A popular group walks by.
Popular Girl:
“Why does he even come to school looking like that?”
Panel 3:
Ren hears it but pretends he didn’t.
Ren (thinking):
“I’m used to it.”
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Page 3
Panel 1:
Gym class. Students choose teams.
Teacher:
“Pick your teams.”
Panel 2:
Everyone gets picked except Ren.
Student:
“Can Ren just sit out? He’ll slow us down.”
Panel 3:
Ren stands alone.
Ren:
“…Sure.”
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Page 4
Panel 1:
After school. Ren walks home in the rain.
Narration:
“People think being ignored doesn’t hurt.”
Panel 2:
Ren looks at his reflection in a store window.
Ren:
“Who am I even trying to impress?”
Panel 3:
He looks away.
Ren:
“I’m tired.”
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Page 5
Panel 1:
Ren arrives home. He opens his phone.
Messages:
* 0 new messages
* 0 missed calls
Panel 2:
He looks at old photos of himself.
Ren:
“I’ve been waiting for someone to notice me…”
Panel 3:
He closes his phone.
Ren:
“But nobody is coming.”
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Page 6
Panel 1:
The next morning. Ren walks into school.
Student:
“Look, it’s the ugly guy.”
Panel 2:
A group laughs.
Student:
“Hey Ren, did you finally give up trying to look normal?”
Panel 3:
Ren stops walking.
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Page 7
Panel 1:
Close-up of Ren’s eyes. For the first time, they look serious.
Ren:
“…Yeah.”
Panel 2:
Everyone gets quiet.
Ren:
“I gave up.”
Panel 3:
Ren walks away.
Narration:
“That was the last day anyone saw Ren Akizuki.”
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2 Years Later
Page 8
Panel 1:
The school entrance. A new semester begins.
Student 1:
“Did you hear? We’re getting a transfer student.”
Student 2:
“Probably nobody special.”
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Page 9
Panel 1:
The classroom door opens.
Teacher:
“We have a new student joining us today.”
Panel 2:
A tall figure stands in the doorway. Perfect black hair. Sharp eyes. Calm expression.
Girls in class:
“…”
Panel 3:
Everyone stares.
Girl:
“Who is that?”
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Page 10
Panel 1:
The boy walks to the front.
Teacher:
“Introduce yourself.”
Boy:
“My name is Ren Akizuki.”
Panel 2:
The classroom freezes.
Student:
“…Ren?”
Panel 3:
Flashback of old Ren.
Student (thinking):
“No way.”
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Page 11
Panel 1:
A girl looks shocked.
Girl:
“That can’t be the same person…”
Panel 2:
Ren sits down calmly.
Ren (thinking):
“Two years ago, I wanted everyone to see me.”
Panel 3:
Close-up of Ren’s eyes.
Ren (thinking):
“Now I don’t need anyone’s approval.”
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Page 12
Panel 1:
The popular girl from before walks past his desk.
Girl:
“Hey… have we met before?”
Panel 2:
Ren looks at her.
Ren:
“Maybe.”
Panel 3:
She looks confused.
Girl:
“Why does it feel like I know you?”
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Final Panel
Ren walks through the hallway. Everyone watches him.
Narration:
“The boy nobody noticed disappeared…”
Narration:
“And the person who returned was someone nobody could ignore.”
NEXT CHAPTER: THE FIRST PERSON WHO RECOGNIZED HIM
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